Did you know that summer is the hottest of the four seasons? It is so hot it will make you want cold refreshing ice cream. On a hot summer day, go to the place where the sun shimmers on the crashing waves, and burning yellow sand. Read more to decide if you love summer.
I love summer because it is hot. In winter the blizzard begins, and the crisp snow falls gently on everything. In the summertime it is hot and when you come inside the air rushes past you. Not the warm air the cool air. And instead of feeling cold, you feel warm.
I love summer because you can get ice cream. Imagine sun pouring down directly hitting you. You feel hot and urge to get some place cool. An idea bubbles into your head. You decide to get ice cream. You hop on your bike and feel the cool breeze across your face. Just when you think you want to stay on your bike, you’re there. You buy your favorite flavor, vanilla bean. And taste it, “What a refreshing treat!”
I love summer because you can go to the beach. Going to the beach is one of
the best places to go to on a hot summer day. When it is too hot out, go to the breezy beach. When you get too hot just hop into the waves. And when you get too cold join your friends and family where the burning yellow sand lives. If you like the beach a lot you live near it. And best of all you have all summer to enjoy it.
Have you decided yet if you love summer? Go outside and experience the sun in the gleaming sky. Get too hot and enjoy your cool refreshing ice cream. Go to the beach and see the crashing waves and burning yellow sand. Have fun!
7 comments:
You make a great case for loving the summer! It's always been my favorite season too, so you had me from the get-go, but your descriptive, persuasive language would probably win over even the biggest fans of Winter! Great writing!
Wow! I also love summer and are so ready for all of it!
I love the words you use to describe the sand and the waves...burning, crashing. These words really add power to your descriptions!
I will think of this essay when I make my first trip to the ocean this summer. Thank you!
Your description of summer is picture perfect! You painted the most wonderful picture in my mind of crashing waves, and I could almost taste the vanilla bean ice cream. Bravo! This is a great piece of writing.
This is a beautifully written essay! I love the imagery and it makes me crave the summer even more! Keep writing..you're amazing!
Wow I love that essay. I feel like I am actually at the beach or having nice cold ice cream on a burning hot day!It is great!
I totally felt like i'm there in the hot sun with you
It feels like I am actually there as I read it.
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