Sunday, April 5, 2020

An Essay About Summer



7 comments:

Anonymous said...

You make a great case for loving the summer! It's always been my favorite season too, so you had me from the get-go, but your descriptive, persuasive language would probably win over even the biggest fans of Winter! Great writing!

Unknown said...

Wow! I also love summer and are so ready for all of it!

I love the words you use to describe the sand and the waves...burning, crashing. These words really add power to your descriptions!

I will think of this essay when I make my first trip to the ocean this summer. Thank you!

Anonymous said...

Your description of summer is picture perfect! You painted the most wonderful picture in my mind of crashing waves, and I could almost taste the vanilla bean ice cream. Bravo! This is a great piece of writing.

Anonymous said...

This is a beautifully written essay! I love the imagery and it makes me crave the summer even more! Keep writing..you're amazing!

Anonymous said...

Wow I love that essay. I feel like I am actually at the beach or having nice cold ice cream on a burning hot day!It is great!

Anonymous said...

I totally felt like i'm there in the hot sun with you

Anonymous said...

It feels like I am actually there as I read it.