Monday, April 20, 2020

Oh Brother

Have you seen my brother? No? Well, he's rude and nice and here’s some reasons. He’s loud. Next, he’s really rude. Last he’s kinda nice so thats it. I hope you like my essay. Let’s get into it. 

   First he’s loud. I’m not trying to be rude but he’s pretty loud. Even if he’s quiet in the morning doesn’t mean he can be quiet in the afternoon. He also does not like going to sleep he makes so much noise at bedtime and a can’t fall asleep because of it. He likes bouncing and dropping on to his bed. It’s hard to ignore it. If you were me with my brother, you would probably not really like it. Also he sits in a weird way! Just saying you don’t wanna hear his screaming if you were me, so this is why he’s really loud. Next he’s rude. He jumps on people. He screams at us when we touch anything that’s his. I hate this a lot. Even if I have to handle this. Even if we touch him he screams at us. STOP! I can’t handle it! Next thing is he kicks us and punches us for no reason! You don’t wanna be me!  Even all these things I said, he is kinda nice. He plays stuff with me and he lets me watch tv with him. He doesn’t distract us when we’re working also I love him but I think he doesn’t really love me. Now if he would be really nice I would be fine and not write this right now. So if you had him as a bro you would probably not like it :). So, you read the essay hmm? I’ll tell you again. These are the three reasons that my brother is rude and nice. First he’s loud, second he’s rude, and last he’s kinda nice. I hope you liked my essay!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I did like your essay! I agree that brothers can have good days and bad, but you are lucky you have a brother! I bet you two will grow up to be great friends. I'm glad you can have someone to play with during this time at home. Great work!

Perk said...

I liked your essay a lot. I have two sisters so I can relate to a lot of what you describe here. I wonder what your brother would write about you?!? Great work!

Roberta Gordon said...

WOW! You are honest!

I loved reading about your brother. He wants activity...yes. Yet, when you are working, he respects that. Thank heavens!

I had three brothers and four sons...no sisters or daughters. So, we had LOTS of activity growing up. ( Now we have added some females to our family.).

As you grow up, I think you will appreciate your brother more.